[cabf_validation] Simpler language for 3.2.2.4.6

[Tim Hollebeek]

Good feedback.  Yes.

 

-Tim

 

From: Validation [mailto:validation-bounces at cabforum.org] On Behalf Of Dimitris Zacharopoulos via Validation
Sent: Sunday, May 13, 2018 1:03 AM
To: validation at cabforum.org
Subject: [cabf_validation] Simpler language for 3.2.2.4.6

 


My team was going over the first paragraph of 3.2.2.4.6 that says:




"Confirming the Applicant's control over the requested FQDN by confirming the presence of a Request Token or Random Value contained in the content of a file or on a web page in the form of a meta tag one of the following under the "/.well‐known/pki‐validation" directory, or another path registered with IANA for the purpose of Domain Validation, on the Authorization Domain Name that is accessible by HARICA via HTTP/HTTPS over an Authorized Port."

 

and had a very hard reading and understanding the requirement. This 6-liner sentence is very hard to read, especially for a non-native English speaker and probably needs some language improvement. Could the working group please spend some time and try to make it a little more simple?

 

 

Thank you,

Dimitris.

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