[cabf_validation] Business Entity Definitions

[Ben Wilson]

Here are my edits.  Sorry it took so long to get these back to you.  I
didn't remove the underlining and strikeout in case someone needed to see
them.

 

From: Cecilia Kam [mailto:Cecilia_Kam at symantec.com] 
Sent: Thursday, June 18, 2015 11:19 AM
To: Ben Wilson; validation at cabforum.org
Subject: RE: Business Entity Definitions

 

Hi Ben, 

 

Draft with changes attached. I also removed (Registered) so two definitions
are Business Entity and Business Entity (Other) 

Let me know your thoughts. 

 

Regards, 

Cecilia

 

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[mailto:validation-bounces at cabforum.org] On Behalf Of Ben Wilson
Sent: Thursday, June 04, 2015 10:53
To: validation at cabforum.org <mailto:validation at cabforum.org> 
Subject: [cabf_validation] Business Entity Definitions

 

On the definition of Business Entity (Registered), I was thinking that we
should improve the phrasing slightly for the first sentence, to read as
follows:

 

Business Entity (Registered):    Any entity with Legal Existence in its
jurisdiction of operation that filed documentation with an Incorporating
Agency or Registration Agency and that is not a Private Organization,
Government Entity, or Non-Commercial Entity, or Business Entity (Other) as
defined herein. .

 

So it would read:  An entity with Legal Existence in its jurisdiction of
operation that filed documentation with an Incorporating Agency or
Registration Agency and that is not a Private Organization, Government
Entity, Non-Commercial Entity, or Business Entity (Other) as defined herein.

 

For Business Entity (Other), what about the following edits?

 

Business Entity (Other):  An entity with Legal Existence not otherwise
classified herein or who's for which registration documentation cannot be
verified with the Registration Agency in its jurisdiction of operation. 

 

OR at least replace "who's" with "for which":

 

Business Entity (Other):  An entity with Legal Existence who's for which
registration documentation cannot be verified with the Registration Agency
in its jurisdiction of operation. 

 

 

 

 

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